Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国好友 Jim 正在准备题为“保护野生动物”的演讲稿，发来邮件咨询相关信息，请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：

1.野生动物生存现状；

2.保护野生动物的措施。

注意：1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim，

I’m glad to hear from you. From your email I have learned that you are preparing for the speech about wildlife protection. I think you choose a good topic and I’d like to share what I know with you.

The number of wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller. Some of them are endangered and even dying out. The reasons are as follows. To start with, people have been cutting down trees for building materials, causing some animals to lose their habitats. Besides, to make money, some people have been killing rare wild animals. They use wild animals like elephants, tigers, antelopes and bears to make handicrafts and medicine. Some wild animals are even hunted and killed to satisfy people’s desire to taste new and novel flavor, such as shark fin soup and even bat soup.

In my opinion, it’s time that we took immediate measures to change the situation. First, we should not cut down trees without the government’s permission. Instead, we are supposed to plant more trees to protect the animals’ living conditions. At the same time, more nature reserves are expected to be set up. Last but not the least, laws to protect wild animals should be made and the people who kill, sell and buy wild animals should be punished seriously. I believe as long as we take action immediately, we will live in harmony with animals and life will become better.

I hope what I said will be of help to you. If you have any questions, please write to me. I’m looking forward to your reply．

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。你的英国好友 Jim 正在准备题为“保护野生动物”的演讲稿，发来邮件咨询相关信息，请就此给他回复邮件。

写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括: 1.野生动物生存现状；2.保护野生动物的措施。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题対于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的开篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。