Question

14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下书信．书信中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉．修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Sir，
    Thank you for invite me to the summer English course in your school．As for your choice between the two courses，I prefer the four-week course because of this will allow me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends．Of all the subject I'm learning at school，I like English best．I had been learning English for eleven years but my spoken English remains poorly．So I really hope to take this chance improve it．If possible，I'd like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in England，that I'm particularly interested in．I believe I will have wonderful time this summer．
Yours truly．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：本文是一封书信，作者表达了自己在两种课程中的选择．作者更喜欢为期四周的课程，因为，那样可以使作者有更多的时间去旅游，结交一些新的朋友．作者希望利用这次机会好好提高自己的口语．

解答 Thank you forinviteme to the summer English course in your school．As foryour 
                      inviting                                                                                    my
choice between the two courses，I prefer the four-week course because of   this will allow
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me more time to do some traveling but make a few new friends．Of all thesubjectI'm
                                                 and                                                      subjects
learning at school，I like English best．I had been learning English for 6 years but my
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spoken English remains poorly．So I hope to take this chance∧improve it．If possible，I'd
                                      poor                                            to
like to stay with a family for a couple of days in order that I can know some customs in
 
England，thatI'm particularly interested in．I believe I will have∧wonderful time this
              which                                                                          a
summer．
Yours truly，
Li Hua

1．invite-inviting    考查动名词．介词for后面接动名词invite----inviting
2．your choice-my choice，考查人称代词．文中作者在叙述自己的选择，而不是其他人的选择，所以用my choice．
3．because of-because  考查原因状语从句的连词．because of后接名词或名词短语，because 后接完整的句子，句中是完整的句子，所以去掉of．
4．but--and 考查连词． 前后之间的关系是并列关系，所以用and．
5．subject-subjects，考查名词单复数． subject是可数名词，前面有all修饰，所以用复数形式．
6．had been-have been   考查时态．本文上下文用的是一般时态，这里要表示完成时态，则需要用现在完成时态．
7．poorly-poor   考查形容词，remain是系动词，系动词后应该用形容词作表语．
8．chance 后加 to 考查不定式． 句中用不定式表示目的．
9．that-which 考查定语从句，本句中含有非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句．所以用关系代词which．
10．have wonderful-have a wonderful  考查冠词搭配． have a  wonderful time固定短语，意思是：玩得愉快．

点评 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．