题目内容
19．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．After lunch，I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot，but all was quiet．Then a strong wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out the open window．As I ran out to catch it，big drop of rain began to fall．When I come back into the house，it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing sound from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened，a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom．
分析 文章大意：本文主要叙述了作者目睹持续了三个多小时的暴风雨的经历．上个周日，午饭后，我会房间休息，空气闷热，突然一阵强风吹进我的房间．桌上的纸穿过窗子飞到空中，我赶紧去追，大的雨点开始落下．当我回到房子，外面的雨下得愈来愈大，然后听到从房子后面传来的一声巨响，原来一颗大树倒下，砸到后屋的屋顶．
解答 Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years．It came sudden and went on for over three hours．
the suddenly
After lunch，I went into my room to have a rest．The air was hot，butall was quiet．Then a strong
and
wind started to blow into my room．Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some
flew out∧the open window．As I ran out to catch it，big drop of rain began to fall．When I come
of them drops came
back into the house，it was raining more harder and harder．Then I heard a loud crashing sound
或改为much
from the back of the house．When I ran out to find out that had happened，a big tree had fallen
what
down and broke the top of the backroom．
broken
1．a 改为the 考查冠词．形容词最高级前应该用定冠词the．
2．sudden 改为suddenly 考查副词．修饰谓语动词，应该用副词．
3．but 改为and 考查连词．前后是并列关系，所以用and．
4．out 后加of 考查介词搭配．out of the window表示出了窗口，out是副词，后面应该用介词of．
5．it改为them 考查人称代词．them指代前面的pieces．
6．drop改为drops 考查名称单复数．drop表示雨点时是可数名词，下雨时，雨点应该用复数形式．
7．come改为came 考查时态．本文是叙述过去发生的事情，所以应该用一般过去时．
8．去掉more，或改为much 考查比较级．比较级前面应该用much修饰．
9．that改为what 考查名词性从句．本句中含有宾语从句，从句中缺少主语，所以用what．
10．broke改为broken 考查谓语动词形式．此处的broken不全应该是had broken，前面有had，这里省略了．
点评 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．
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A．write so many novels
B．continue to be inventive in his writing
C．write disturbing plots
D．have a writing career spanning over four decades
71．Why does the setting of Jin-Shei appeal to the reviewer？C
A．It is a good science of fiction setting
B．It is mysterious．
C．It is a less common choice of setting
D．It is very magical．
72．Terry Brook's novel continues a series onA．
A．the adventures of an unsuspecting hero and his attempts to rescue his aunt
B．a quest about the High Druid of Shannara in a secret chamber in Paranor
C．the disappearance of a druid which foils the plans of the enemies
D．liberating a stranded aunt who is key to the knowledge of the Forbidding．
| A． | when | B． | until | C． | since | D． | before |
| A． | or else | B． | in case | C． | in that | D． | or rather |
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B．a group offering books for children in Africa
C．a website aimed to work with non-profit groups
D．a company giving away a book with a book sold
65．Which organization supports education in Africa？B
A．Worldfund． B．Invisible Children．
C．Room to Read． D．Feed the Children
66．We can learn from the passage that book drivesC．
A．are one of the literacy and education nonprofits
B．are run by college service club volunteers for free
C．help collect books in colleges as well as universities
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