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2.假如你叫李华,六一儿童节就要到了,你所在的学校将要组织学生老师代表去慰问当地一家孤儿院( orphanage ).请你给外教Tina 写封信,邀请她参加.要点如下:
1.提出邀请;
2.活动的意义;
3.介绍活动的时间及几项活动安排;
4.期待她的加入.
注意:1.字数 120左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅;3.开头和结尾已给出.
Dear Tina,
I'd like to invite you tojoin us for a visit to a local orphanage next Sunday for Children's Day.Here are some details about the activity.
The reason why our school will organize such an activity is that we should show our concerns and love to children,especially these disabled children.(高分句型一)At the same time,giving is receiving.
We will leave school by bus at 9:00 a.m.and return at 4:00 p.m.We will donate books and toys to children.We will spend fun time together singing,dancing,and playing games,which may help them feel happy from the heart.(高分句型二)You are a popular and easy-going teacher in our school.Therefore,your presence will definitely cheer the children up.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假如你叫李华,六一儿童节就要到了,你所在的学校将要组织学生老师代表去慰问当地一家孤儿院( orphanage ).请你给外教Tina 写封信,邀请她参加,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:提出邀请;活动的意义;介绍活动的时间及几项活动安排;期待她的加入.2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:At the same time同时;Therefore因此;cheer the children up使孩子们振作起来;Look forward to盼望;
The reason why our school will organize such an activity is that we should show our concerns and love to children,especially these disabled children.(高分句型一)
We will spend fun time together singing,dancing,and playing games,which may help them feel happy from the heart.(高分句型二)

解答 Dear Tina,
       I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit to a local orphanage next Sunday for Children's Day.Here are some details about the activity.
       The reason why our school will organize such an activity is that we should show our concerns and love to children,especially these disabled children.(高分句型一)At the same time,giving is receiving.
       We will leave school by bus at 9:00 a.m.and return at 4:00 p.m.We will donate books and toys to children.We will spend fun time together singing,dancing,and playing games,which may help them feel happy from the heart.(高分句型二)You are a popular and easy-going teacher in our school.Therefore,your presence will definitely cheer the children up.
       Looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                                Yours sincerely
                                                                                    Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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