Question

2．假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者；以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻，谙根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿．
内容要求：
1．描述漫画内容；2．发表个人感想．
注意：
1．短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯
3．词数120左右；
4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息．
参考词汇：告示牌sign
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday，I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"图表+提纲类"形式，根据文章所给内容要求写一篇稿件，描述图片同时发表感想，既是图画作文又是提纲类作文．写作时，描述图片时态应该用一般过去时．人称用第一和第三人称．重要短语：go sightseeing （去观光），be full of…．（装满，充满…．），caught one's eye （吸引某人的注意…．），deep in thought（深思），do as sb do （按某人做的那样做），turn into （变成），mind our behavior （注意自己的行为），in this way（以这种方式）．

解答 Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday，I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park．The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring，with the sun shining and birds singing．When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around，something unpleasant caught my eye．A young couple in a boat were eating，talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world．【高分句型】What's worse，they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake，totally ignoring the noticeable sign"No Littering nearby"．【高分句型】What a shame!（描述图片）
 Such behavior left me deep in thought．If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did，the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin．I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places．Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings．（发表感想）

点评 写好这类图片及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．