Question

9．现今，中学生由于学业繁重几乎都没有在家承担任何家务责任．你觉得中学生应该承担家务责任吗？请你对"承担家务责任"的话题表达自己的看法．你的写作应包括以下要点：
（1）你觉得现在孩子做家务的情况如何；
（2）你认为孩子在家是否需承担家务的责任；
（3）以你自己或他人的体验，说明承担家务责任对孩子成长带来的影响．
注意：词数1 20左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文是根据所给要点内容写一篇关于中学生是否应该承担家务责任的短文，属于提纲作文．在写作时人称用第一人称和第三人称，时态用一般现在时和一般过去时．重要短语：take it for granted（认为…理所当然），take on （承担），takes one's role in…（承担角色/起作用），participate in …（参加），be proud to（高兴，自豪），sympathetic（富有同情心），considerate（考虑周到的）．

解答 Nowadays，quite a lot of children take it for granted that their parents do all the chores at home．【高分句型】They are either busy playing games or doing their schoolwork but seldom wash dishes or do the cleaning．（孩子做家务的情况）
It is，of course，not right for children not to take on any responsibility in the household．As a family member，a child should help with the housework so that their parents can relax themselves after a long day's work..If a child takes his role in the housework，he will become sympathetic and considerate and would like to help others．（孩子在家是否需承担家务的责任）
I used to be rather lazy．，not participating in any housework and did not understand my parents'hardship until one day  I helped clean the house．【高分句型】From then on，I found it a pleasure to help others and I am proud to say I have grown to be a person who can take on responsibilities both at home and at school．（以自己的体验，说明承担家务责任对孩子成长带来的影响）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．