Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的家乡遭受了一次雪灾。请你根据所给提示为你校英文报写一篇英语短文，报道此次事件。

时间	2017年1月19日
原因	暴风雪
灾情	积雪厚度达30厘米，交通中断； 许多房屋被毁，100多人无家可归。
救援 情况	1. 部队赶来帮助转移被困村民； 2. 地方政府及时为村民提供帐篷、食物、衣服及药品等。

注意：1. 100字左右；

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】OnJanuary19, 2017, aviolentsnowdisasterhitmyhometownas a result of a five-day snowstorm.

The village was covered with deep snow which rose up to a height of 30cm. The roads were completely blocked, which made it impossible for villagers to get around. And many animals were also killed in the disaster. What’s worse, many of the houses were seriously damaged, leaving over 100 people homeless.

Fortunately, help came soon. Soldiers came and took trapped people to a safe place. And tents, food, clothes and medicine were sent to the villagers without delay by the local government.

【解析】这是一篇新闻报道。新闻报道，就是对新近发生的事实的报道，一般包括五个部分：标题、导语、主体、背景、结语。新闻报道的语言应具备以下几个特点：客观、具体、准确、简练。

就本篇写作而言，可以分为三段：

第一段：导语。概括报道的核心内容——李华的家乡遭受了一次雪灾，部队和地方政府展开救援。

第二段：主体。详细介绍雪灾情况和救援情况的具体内容。

第三段：结语。对本次活动进行简短评论。

【本文亮点】1. 文章条理清晰，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

2. 语言简练，同时what’s worse及fortunately, …. leaving over 100 people homeless , The roads …, which made it impossible for….等词汇与句型的使用，为文章增色添彩。