Question

【题目】健康是学习的重要保证。请根据提示写一篇班会的发言稿，谈谈作为一名高中生，该如何保持身体健康。应包含以下要点：

1、健康的饮食

2、充足的睡眠

3、适当的锻炼

要求：1.100词左右

2.可更具内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】People are beginning to attach much more importance to their health these days than ever before. They begin to realize that good health is the most valuable possession a person can have. Health is especially important to us students . In my opinion, there are three things we can do if we want to be in good. 　　

First, we should have the right food, because proper nutrition is the most important for good health. Avoid foods with lots of sugar and fat. Eat plenty of high protein foods, vegetables and fruits. Do not overeat. Secondly, we should get proper amount of sleep, because without enough sleep, we will often feel tired and irritable. Allow ourselves at least eight hours of sleep each day. Have a nap at noon if time permits. Finally, we should exercise regularly, because'life depends on exercise'. Regular exercise strengthens our hearts andlungs. In addition, it prevents us from putting on weight.　　

If everyone is to do so, there will be much less complaining about poor health and there will be much more happiness in our life.

【解析】试题分析：

本文要求根据提示写一篇关于如何保持健康的发言稿。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：写作背景（很多人开始关注健康，意识到健康的身体很重要）；第二段：叙述保持健康的方法（用First, Secondly，Finally，In addition使这部分流畅）；第三段：鼓励（如果都这样做，会少些埋怨多些快乐）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：含有宾语从句和定语从句的复合句They begin to realize that good health is the most valuable possession a person can have.；定语从句的使用In my opinion, there are three things we can do if we want to be in good.；使用多个祈使句Avoid foods with lots of sugar and fat. Eat plenty of high protein foods, vegetables and fruits. Do not overeat.等等。2.使用了过渡词语：First, Secondly，Finally，In addition 等。3.使用了重要短语：attach much more importance to认为…很重要；depend on依靠；prevents… from阻止；put on weight增加体重。