Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你在学校举行的主题为“My Dream”的英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖，并即将参加颁奖典礼。请你用英语写一篇获奖感言，内容包括：

1．获奖感受；

2．表达谢意；

3．你的打算。

注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi，everyone,

I feel so honored to have won the first prize in this English speech contest. It is really a big surprise for me as there are so many excellent speakers.

Standing here, I first owe my success to my dear teacher Ms. Li. It was she who gave me so much encouragement and guidance to prepare for this contest ，who helped me to improve my oral English. Without her, I couldn’t have made it.

I know that is still a long way for me to go and I’m determined to study harder in the coming days.

Thank you!

【解析】本文考查提纲类作文。要求用英语写一篇获奖感言。首先仔细阅读有关提示，弄清提供的所有信息，判断文章的人称和时态，就本文而言，应该用第一人称，一般现在时。其次，要明确要点：1．获奖感受；2．表达谢意；3．你的打算。注意要在提纲的范围内进行分析，构思和想象，不要遗漏要点，要依据提示情景和语句，按照一定的逻辑来写，使用适当的过渡词增强文章的流畅性。最后注意要多使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【范文亮点】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：I feel so honored to have won…使用了非谓语动词的完成时 ；…as there are so many excellent speakers使用了状语从句；Standing here, I first owe my success to…使用了现在分词作状语和词组owe…to…；It was she who gave me…使用了强调句型；…who helped me to improve my oral English使用了定语从句；I know that is still a long way for me to go…使用了宾语从句和词组a long way to go。总之，是一篇优秀的范文。