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15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
With Chinese economy has developed fast，the life standard has improved rapid．A lot of people have money to travel abroad．Recently，I saw a video，which was about what the foreigners judged Chinese tourists．The video reported the crazy situation where Chinese tourists created．In the foreigners eyes，Chinese tourists are rich．But at the same time，they were annoying by the acts of Chinese tourists．Some of them would like write some words in the tourist sites and some people would spit anytime and anywhere．As far as I'm concerned about，when we are in the foreign countries，what we do somehow present the image of their motherland，so it is important to act politely．

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分析 短文叙述了随着中国经济的发展越来越多的中国人到外国去旅游，但是也有很多令人生气的做法，有损中国的形象．

解答 With Chinese economy has developed fast，the life standard has improvedrapid．A lot of people have money to travel abroad．Recently，I saw a video，which was about what the foreigners judged Chinese tourists．The video reported the crazy situation where Chinese tourists created．In the foreigners eyes，Chinese tourists are rich．But at the same time，they were annoying by the acts of Chinese tourists．Some of them would like∧write some words in the tourist sites and some people would spit anytime and anywhere．As far as I'm concerned about，when we are in the foreign countries，what we do somehow present the image oftheir motherland，so it is important to act politely．
1．With改为As；   考查连接词．Chinese economy has developed fast随着中国经济的快速发展，是一个句子，所以用as连词引导状语从句．
2．rapid改为rapidly；  考查副词．此处修饰动词improve需使用副词形式．   
3．what改为how；  考查连接词，根据句意可知，我看了一个视频关于外国人如何评价中国游客，故使用how．
4．where 改为that/which；     考查定语从句．定语从句中create缺少宾语，故使用which或that．  
5．foreigners改为 foreigners'；  考查名词所有格．此处表示外国人的，使用foreigners'．
6．annoying 改为 annoyed；考查形容词．表示人感到生气恼火用annoyed．
7．would like之后加 to；   考查短语．此处would like to do 表示想要做某事．
 8．删掉concerned about中的about；考查介词．As far as I'm concerned是一个固定短语，表示就我所知．
9．present 改为presents；  考查动词．主语what we do 我们所做的，是一个从句做主语，谓语需用单数形式．
10．their改为 our考查物主代词，根据句意可知，代表的是我们祖国的形象，故使用our．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．