Question

3．你的美国朋友Rose要来中国参加汉语演讲比赛．她对比赛感到非常紧张，特意发来电子邮件，向你求助．请据此并结合下面的写作提示给她回一封信．
要点：1．赛前如何准备；
2．比赛中的注意事项；
3．祝她好运．
Dear Rose，
You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Chinese Speech Contest．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．【高分句型一】Just take it easy．Here are some suggestions which I think may be helpful．（表示理解并给予安慰）
First，you should be prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．【高分句型二】Besides，look at your nervousness as a positive thing，which can give you the energy to deliver your speech in an emotive way．Last but not least，as the old saying goes，the confidence is the first secret of success．So do have faith in yourself．（给出建议并说明理由）
Hope these can benefit you．May you succeed in the competition！（表达祝愿）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封安慰信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：（1）表示理解并给予安慰；（2）给出建议并说明理由；（3）表达祝愿．
高分句型：
1．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．句子里What引导主语从句 you should keep in mind做从句的宾语；that引导表语从句 most people feel nervous like you
你应该知道的是多数人都和你一样紧张．
2．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．句子里用了比较级+比较级的结构，表示"越来越"．
你对课程越熟悉，你就越不会紧张．

解答 Dear Rose，
      You wrote to ask for advice on how to get rid of your nervousness right before the Chinese Speech Contest．What you should keep in mind is that most people feel nervous like you．【高分句型一】Just take it easy．Here are some suggestions which I think may be helpful．（表示理解并给予安慰）
     First，you should be prepared and understand the subject of your speech completely．The more familiar you are with the subject，the less nervous you will be．【高分句型二】Besides，look at your nervousness as a positive thing，which can give you the energy to deliver your speech in an emotive way．Last but not least，as the old saying goes，the confidence is the first secret of success．So do have faith in yourself．（给出建议并说明理由）
      Hope these can benefit you．May you succeed in the competition！（表达祝愿）
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．