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16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

Dear Jin Jing，
Your puzzle is common problem among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all，believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next，trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies，Unless anyone is in trouble，you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence，you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours，
Lily．

分析 文章大意：本文是Lily写给JIn Jing 的一封信．信中主要是解决Jin Jing 的困惑，给他一些建议．他的困惑在中学生中是很常见的．首先，要相信自己，他最大的问题就是缺乏自信心：必须对同学微笑，其次和有共同兴趣的同学进行交流．

解答 Your puzzle is∧common problem among middle school students．Maybe the following  advices can help you．First in all，
                       a                                                                                                        advice                                 of
believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it  is to smile at your
                                                                                                                                                          去掉 
 classmates．One smile speaks  loud about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly
                                               louder
 to him．Next，trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you．You can discuss your
    them            try                                                                                shares
 studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies，Unless anyone is in trouble，you should be ready to help
                                                                                                    If
 him or her．Once you have confidence，you can make as many friends as possibly．
                                                                                                             possible



1．在common前加a，考查冠词． problem 是可数名词，其前受到形容词common的修饰，且表示泛指，故应在common前加a．
2．advices-advice，考查名词单复数． advice是不可数名词，故应将advices改为advice．
3．of-in，考查介词搭配． first of all是固定短语，意思是"首先"，故应将in改为of．
4．去掉it，考查定语从句．"The first thing is to smile at your classmates"是句子主干，"you must do"是定语从句，其先行词为the first thing，关系词在定语从句中作do的宾语，故应去掉it．
5．loud-louder，考查比较级．由本句中than可知，这里是前后进行对比，故应将loud 改为louder．
6．him-them，考查人称代词，句意：你的微笑表明你对同学们是友好的．故应将him改为them．
7．trying-try，考查谓语动词．这里是祈使句，故应将trying改为try．
8..share-shares，考查主谓一致．who share the same interest as you"是定语从句，其先行词是a student，定语从句中的谓语动词应与先行词保持一致，故应将share改为shares．
9．Unless-If，考查从属连词．句意：如果任何人有麻烦了，你应该乐意帮助他或她．故应将Unless改为If．
10．possibly-possible，考查固定搭配．"as …as possible"是固定短语，意思是"尽可能地…"．

点评 做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．

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2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限-词；
 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）．只允许修改l0处，多者（从第1l处起）不计分．
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8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分．

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Refund Policy：
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The Boston Opera House Policies
●Some shows may not be appropriate for children of all ages．Please enquire at 617.259.3400．
●Regardless of age，everyone must have a ticket．No"babies in arms"will be allowed．
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●Leave yourself enough time for traffic．
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A．at the box office         
B．by telephone         
C．through e-mail      
D．on the website
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A．You don't need to pay extra fees              
B．You can get free parking and dining
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*Guided sightseeing tour of"Paris By Day"and"Paris By Night"
*Visit to Palace of Versailles （admission not included）
*Tour on Montmartre
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41．The Ibis is aBin Paris_
A．restaurant         B．hotel           C．bar           D．nightclub
42．The underlined word"quarter"in Paragraph 4refers to．"B"
A．a period of time      B．district         C．the fourth part   D．exhibition
43．Besides the price of￡129，each tourist will have to spend money onC
A．the continental breakfast
B．the tour of Montmartre
C．the admission to Palace of Versailles
D．the services of an experienced tour guide
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A．have half a day free on the third day
B．have a"Paris By Night"tour on the first evening
C．have a pleasure voyage on the River Seine together
D．live in a simple hotel far away from Paris
45．The main purpose of this passage is toD
A．tell tourists the route to Paris
B．inform people about the cost of traveling to Paris
C．introduce the city of Paris
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