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1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）．只允许修改l0处，多者（从第1l处起）不计分．
My grandparents live in the countryside．They keep a dog calling Ah Bao．One day my grandparents go to work in the fields，taking along my little brother and Ah Bao．My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself．My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river．Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water．Hearing about him barking，my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother．Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother，that moved all the people present．Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness．

分析 我的祖父母住在乡下，他们养了一条叫阿宝的狗．有一天去地里干活，带着我的弟弟和阿宝．弟弟和阿宝去附近的小河边玩，弟弟在捉蝴蝶的时候掉进了河里，阿宝马上跳进水里救弟弟．人们都被感动了，每个人都夸阿宝勇敢．

解答 My grandparents live in the countryside．They keep a dog calling Ah Bao．
                                                                                       called
One day my grandparents go to work in the fields，taking along my little brother and Ah Bao．
                                    went
My brother and Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself．
                                                                                      themselves
My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river．
                                                              when                   the
Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water．Hearing about him barking，
                            immediately                                              去掉
my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother．

Ah Bao did all he could∧save my little brother，that moved all the people present．
                                  加to                                which
Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness．
                                                bravery
1．calling改为called．题干中call是用来作dog的后置定语，表达被动，要用过去分词．
2．go改为went．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
3．himself改为themselves．逻辑指代错误，句意表达的他们，要用对应的反身代词．
4．while改为when．句意表达的是正在那时，要用when，相当于at that time．
5．a改为the．第二次提到，是特指他们去的那条河．
6．immediate改为immediately．修饰动词要用副词．
7．about去掉．hear是及物动词，表示听见，不需要添加介词．hear about表达的听说，与句意不符．
8．加to．题干中he could是定语从句，修饰前面的all；could后省略了动词do；to save是作目的状语．
9．that改为which．非限制性定语从句中，不能用that来引导．
10．brave改为bravery．题干中是作介词for的宾语，要用名词形式．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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9．第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误．请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分．
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

Dear Jin Jing，
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[写作内容]
1．以约30词概括上文的主要内容；
2．以约120词就"父母是否应该掌管压岁钱"进行讨论，并包括以下要点：
（1）你是如何处理压岁钱的？
（2）父母应该掌管压岁钱吗？
（3）你有什么建议给文中的小男孩？
[写作要求]
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
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[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯．
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C
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C．Apple product sellers．
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