Question

【题目】随着智能手机的普及，“低头族”也越来越多。假定你是李华，请根据以下要点提示，用英语给某编辑部写一封读者来信，以引起社会各界对此的广泛关注

1. 描述这一现象；2. 分析其原因及弊端；3. 你认为该如何改变现状。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 但可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数。

参考词汇：低头族phubbing 现象：phenomenon

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I’m writing to you about a common phenomenon to draw it to the public attention.

With smart phones widely used, there are more and more Phubbings. As is often the case, when people are having meals, waiting for buses or even walking along streets, they are always addicted to their phones, heads hanging down, completely ignoring others.

The reason for the increasing number of phubbings everywhere is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to do nearly everything, such as playing mobile games, shopping online and keeping in touch with friends through QQ. However, too much exposure to phones is harmful for their health and safety. Moreover, people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them.

Personally, people should wisely use their phones to help with their work and study. Meanwhile they’d better care more about their family and friends rather than phones.

Best wishes to you!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】文章要求根据随着智能手机的普及，“低头族”也越来越多这一现象用英语给某编辑部写一封读者来信，以引起社会各界对此的广泛关注。文章是书信格式，分为三部分来写。第一部分描述这一现象的严重性，引起人们注意；第二部分分析其原因及弊端；最后一部分发表自己的观点该如何改变现状。

写作时要求条理清楚，结构安排合理，还要注意高级词汇和句型的使用来提高亮点。如With smart phones widely used是with的复合结构；表语从句that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to do nearly everything；be addicted to, engaged in, rather than等词语和As is often the case, However, Moreover, Personally等连接词。