Question

假如你是李明， 你已经在新的学校学习了3个月，你的笔友Steve来信询问你的学习生活各方面的情况。请你向他写一封回信。

1.分享你在这3个月中所遇到的困难（新环境新同学，学习上的难度，想家等）

2.如何在老师及同学的帮助下成功克服它们，慢慢融入新的班级。

要求：字数 100-120

想家 homesick

Dear Steve,

Many thanks for your concern. _____________________________________________

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Looking forward to your telling me your study life.

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Steve,

Many thanks for your concern. I am glad to share with you my sorrow and success of my  life in the new school this term. When I first came to this new school, I found everything was new to me and I was at a loss. Besides, the study was getting more difficult than before. What’s worse, sometimes I was so homesick that I felt lonely and even began to lose heart.

Fortunately, with the help of my teachers, I got through all the trouble. In addition, thanks to my new helpful classmates，I managed to become a confident member of the new class. Now, I am proud to tell you that I am making progress every day!

Looking forward to your telling me you study life.

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文，本文的文字提示只是给出了部分内容，很大一部分都要靠考生自己去筛选和组织，在讲述自己遇见的困难时，要选取典型的事件，选取最能体现3个月中所遇见的困难。写作时使用合适的连接词来连接全文，运用高级词汇和高级句式让文章充满变化，特别注意所选词汇要符合书信的特点。

考点：考查提纲类作文

点评：提纲类作文的关键在于要把提纲里的所有要点都包括在文章之内，不能有任何的遗漏，在写作的时候要使用高级的词汇和句型，让文章不要那么的平淡，提高文章的档次。