Question

假如你是李明，你跟你的朋友Paul聊天，他表示学习压力(stress)很大，请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。
【写作内容】
1．将自己的问题告诉老师和同学，请求得到他们的帮助。
2．不要总想着考试成绩，要多想想自己在哪些方面进步了，这样就会给自己自信(confidence)。
3．多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。
4．你对他的祝福。
【写作要求】
信的开头和结尾已给出，要求句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Dear Paul,
I feel sorry for you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Paul,
I feel sorry for you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. First of all, I suggest that you should share your trouble with your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. Secondly, you are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence. In addition, I advise you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.
I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

解析试题分析：这是一篇建议信，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难度不大，在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。
考点：考查建议信作文
点评：建议信作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。提出建议要切实可行，要符合英语习惯，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。