Question

9．假设你是李华，你所在的班级决定成立"大乐英语俱乐部"．请你给你校的外教John写封信，邀请他加入该俱乐部，要点如下：
1．成立俱乐部的目的；
2．活动时间和地点；
3．活动内容；
4．邀请加入．
注意：1．词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计总词数；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear John，
                 ．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，给外教John写一封信．邀请他加入你班成立的"大乐英语俱乐部"．
写作时人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主．
写作要点：1．成立俱乐部的目的； 2．活动时间和地点；3．活动内容； 4．邀请加入．
重要短语：arouse one's interest（激发某人的兴趣），provide a platform for sb （给某人提供一个平台），decide to do sth（决定做某事），set up  （建立，搭建），a variety of （各种各样，许多），put on（上演），on behalf of（代表），be honored to do（很荣幸做某事），invite sb to do（邀请某人做某事），become interested in（对…感兴趣），work hard（努力学习）．
【高分句型】
1．We'll gather in our classroom after school every Saturday，during when a variety of activities will be organized，
此处是由"介词+when"引导的非限制性定语从句，主句为"We'll gather in our classroom after school every Saturday"，先行词为"after school every Saturday"．
2．I'm in firm belief that your appearance in our club will definitely inspire us all to become more interested in learning and using English and therefore work harder at English．
此处为连接词"that"引导的同位语从句，解释说明名词"belief"的具体内容．

解答 Dear John，
To arouse our interest in English learning and provide a platform for us to learn and practice using English，our class has decided to set up Big Fun English Club．（成立俱乐部的目的）
We'll gather in our classroom after school every Saturday，during when a variety of activities will be organized，【高分句型】such as watching English movies，singing English songs，putting on English plays，having debates in English and so on．（成立俱乐部的目的、活动内容）
On behalf of our class，I'm much honored to warmly invite you to join us．I'm in firm belief that your appearance in our club will definitely inspire us all to become more interested in learning and using English and therefore work harder at English．【高分句型】We'll be expecting you in our class at 5：00 pm this Saturday．（邀请加入）
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．