Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华，你校正在创建“和谐校园”。请你代表学生会给全校学生写一封倡议书，内容包括：

1. 倡议目的；

2. 倡议内容；

3. 提出呼吁。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：和谐校园harmonious campus

Dear fellow students,

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The Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】Dear fellow students,

Harmony is the common feature of all beautiful things. In order to create a pleasant environment, our school is aiming to build a harmonious campus. As students, we can do our part to achieve this goal.

First of all, we should keep our campus clean and take good care of every tree and every flower. Secondly, not only should we show respect for our teachers, but we are also supposed to care for each other and help those in need. Most importantly, for us students, nothing is more essential that studying hard and taking an active part in school activities. It is when every individual makes an effort that we can have a more beautiful and harmonious school.

Let’s take action.

The Student Union

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封创建“和谐校园”的倡议书。

第一步：

审题：倡议书

人称：第一人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明倡议的目的，第二部分说明倡议的具体内容，

第三部分呼吁大家行动起来。

要点：

1.倡议的目的：创建“和谐校园”

2.倡议的具体内容

①保持校园清洁，爱护树木花草

②尊敬老师，互相关爱和帮助

③努力学习，积极参加学校活动

3．呼吁大家行动起来

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

harmony；create a pleasant environment；aim to do；achieve goal；keep our campus clean；show respect for；care for；in need；study hard；take an active part in；makes an effort；take action

第三步：连词成句

(1) Harmony is the common feature of all beautiful things.

(2) Our school is aiming to build a harmonious campus.

(3) We should keep our campus clean and take good care of every tree and every flower.

(4) Not only should we show respect for our teachers, but we are also supposed to care for each other and help those in need.

(5) We should study hard and take an active part in school activities.

(6) Every individual makes an effort.

(7) We can have a more beautiful and harmonious school.

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序：first of all，to begin/start with，in the beginning，firstly，secondly，lastly，finally，in the end

表示并列或补充关系：what is more，besides，moreover，apart from，in addition，as well as，not only…but (also)，meanwhile，in the meantime

表示转折对比关系：but，however，although，though，yet，while，on one hand，on the other hand

表示因果关系：because，as，therefore，as a result，as a consequence，consequently，thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。