Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 在做关于“中学生做家务”的调查，想了解你做家务的情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：

1）你平时做哪些家务；

2）你对中学生做家务的看法。

注意: 1.词数不少于 50；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

Knowing you are conducting a survey of the housework that high school students do at home, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.

Although my school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time. I will clean up after dinner. I also help with other things like sweeping and dusting. Every once in a while, I will cook something for my family. So far, my spaghetti has been the most delicious dish.

I think high school students should do some housework. For one thing, by doing housework we learn to take responsibility at home, and in the longer term, in society. For another, I find the time spent doing housework with my parents really fun and rewarding; we chat with each other and sometimes even sing together. Doing housework can be a great break from my busy school work.

Good luck with your survey.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，回复Jim关于你做家务的情况。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文；

人称：第一、二人称为主；

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时；

要点：

1）你平时做哪些家务；

2）你对中学生做家务的看法。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

at home；manage to do；from time to time；clean up；a survey of；so far；do some housework；in the longer term；take responsibility；chat with；school work等

第三步：连词成句

1. Knowing you are conducting a survey of the housework that high school students do at home, I’m writing to tell you about what I do.

2. Although my school schedule is rather tight, I still manage to help with the housework from time to time.

3. I also help with other things like sweeping and dusting.

4. Every once in a while, I will cook something for my family.

5. I think high school students should do some housework.

6. By doing housework we learn to take responsibility at home, and in the longer term, in society.

7. I find the time spent doing housework with my parents really fun and rewarding.

8. Doing housework can be a great break from my busy school work.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表转折对比关系：Although；For one thing…For another…；

2.表并列补充关系：still；also；and；even；

3.表示时间关系：Every once等

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改