题目内容
12.据报道十八位复旦大学学生去黄山探险遇险,报警求救.相关部门派出救援队伍前往营救,历尽艰辛救出了学生,但有一位民警不幸牺牲.请就"是否应该鼓励大学生去探险"这个话题谈谈你的看法.探险:explore or go to unknown places
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分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
Some people take it for granted that college students should explore the unknown world by exploreing.
一些人们想当然地认为大学生该研究探索未知的世界.
高分句型二:
They can hardly make any new discovery because the world has been explored mostly and is still being explored by scientists.
他们几乎不可能有任何新发现,因为世界已经被仍在探索的科学家探索的差不多了.
解答 When asked about a theme,different people will offer different opinions.Exploreing is no exception.Some people take it for granted that college students should explore the unknown world by exploreing(高分句型一).However,others hold that it is unnecessary and insignificant to be engaged in any adventure in modern times.
As far as I am concerned,I'm in favor of the second view.The reasons are as follows.
Firstly,there is an element of truth that to transform the world college students should know it first,but it doesn't follow that people need to go adventuring.It is unnecessary for modern people to sail around the world in a small boat single-handed,or pass through the desert of the jungle on foot alone,etc.The reason is that there are hardly any places in the world that have never been discovered.A case in point is that eighteen Fudan University students to explore Mount Huang distress,alarm for help,lead to a placeman died in the Mount Huang in the end.Although theie adventure caused a stir in society,I think it was worthless and insignificant because the wen adventuring only out of curiosity and didn't make any valuable discovery as Columbia did.Therefore,the first view cannot bear much analysis.
In conclusion,in modern times college students need not to adventuring.They can hardly make any new discovery because the world has been explored mostly and is still being explored by scientists(高分句型二).
点评 这是一篇开放式作文,写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译,而是要添加些内容,使文章看起来更充实,要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文.需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.

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1.Listen first.
One of the best English speaking tips is to listen carefully to understandable English EVERY DAY.Most people turn to textbooks to study English grammar rules,but you cannot learn the correct English pronunciation of the words merely by reading them.You do not need to learn grammar in detail because this can prevent you from speaking English fluently.
Instead,listen to how native English speakers pronounce and observe their mouth movements.Also watch English shows and movies to build on your English accent and improve your vocabulary.
2.Practice makes perfect.
Studies show that you'll probably spend three months of practice every day in order to have strong mouth muscles.Read aloud in English for 15to 20minutes a day in front of the mirror,which helps in accent reduction and improves your English communication skills.
Also,practice with your friends and family.Talking with a good English speaker can help improvise (即兴发挥) your usage of words and formation of sentences.
3.Think in English.
One of the most effective English speaking tips is to think in English.What most English learners do in the early stages of learning is that they think of what they have to say in their native language,translate and then say it in English.This can be mentally tiring.
If your goal is to speak English fluently,you need to learn"thinking"in English.Make up the sentences in English as you think about them before saying them.With practice,you will be able to respond automatically in English.
4.Be more confident.
All these English speaking tips will be in vain if you are not that confident in your English speaking skills.It is quite natural to commit errors when learning a new language.
Try to relax if you're speaking in English.When you speak at a normal speed,you'll discover that you will be able to pronounce the words correctly and people will understand you.Most of the time,the person you are talking to is not even aware of your errors.
In a word,learning English does not happen overnight.It takes a lot of time,effort and practice.Don't get too frustrated and never give up.Follow these English speaking tips and practice daily.Soon,you would learn to speak English fluently as if it is your own language.
English speaking tips you must know
Introduction | It's many people's dream to (90)avoidthe discomfort from being unable to speak English in a new place. |
Tips | Listen first. v Seeking help from textbooks won't enable you to learn the (91)correctEnglish pronunciation. v Listen to how native English speakers pronounce and observe how their mouths (92)move. v Watch English shows and movies to improve your English accent and (93)vocabulary. |
Practice makes perfect. v Practice three months to (94)strengthenyour mouth muscles. v Regular reading (95)aloudcan reduce accent and improve your English communication skills. v Practice with your friends and family. | |
Think in English. v Thinking in your native language makes you (96)tiredmentally. v Thinking in English will reward you with automatic (97)response/reactionin English. | |
Be more confident. v Committing errors is a necessary part of language learning. v Try to relax to speak at a normal speed and make yourself(98)understood. | |
(99)Conclusion | Learning English does not happen overnight. |
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