题目内容
7.假设你叫李华.你的英国笔友Jack在邮件中谈到缓解学习压力的最好办法就是利用周末时间到野外放松一下.他建议你尝试一下郊外远足,并就物品准备和安全问题提出了一些注意事项.请回复邮件,表示感谢并告知你和你的同学的周末远足计划.注意:1.词数:120-150,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.参考词汇:远足hiking;创可贴band-aid
Dear Jack,
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一:
I would like to thank you for your valuable suggestions,which brings us a good weekend.
谢谢你提出的宝贵建议,这给我们带来了一个愉快的周末.
高分句型二:
We have some fun games,which can not only relax the pressure of learning,but also enhance our feelings.
我们还准备了许多游戏,这不仅可以放松学习的压力,还能增进我们的感情.
解答 Dear Jack,
I would like to thank you for your valuable suggestions,which brings us a good weekend plan.Next let me tell you something about it(高分句型一).
Next Sunday,I will go hiking with my classmates in Zhongshan Park.In that day the weather is very good,our mood will be good too.We'll meet at 8a.m.at the school gate and then we'll go to Zhongshan Park by bike,which can promote our feelings.We prepare some food and some useful things as you suggested.In the morning,we'll climb the hill and flying a kite in the mountains.When we feel a little tired,we can stop and enjoy our lunch.What a delicious food!Cookies,apples,fruit,even sweets!After a good lunch,we will continue our trip,We have some fun games,which can not only relax the pressure of learning,but also enhance our feelings(高分句型二).What a funny day!
Thank you again.Even though we are in different countries,I'll always stay in touch with you.
Yours
Li Hua.
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
