Question

第三部分写作（共两节，满分30分）

第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 Dear Mr White,

I am writing tell you a piece of good news. Last week our school hold a Spoken English Competition. I stood out in the competition and won a first place. In my view, it is your kind help which has helped me gain the achievement. During your spare time, you often spent such much time help?ing me with your spoken English that I made rapid progress. In the competi?tion, I followed your advices on how to behave, which led to my success. I'm grateful to you for your help and decide that I will make up more efforts and try to make great progress in the future.

I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.

          Yours sincerely, Li Hua

Answer 1

第三部分第一节Dear Mr White,

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I'm looking forward to   hear   from you soon.

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Yours sincerely, Li Hua