Question

2．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
As a child I dreamed of become a movie star，while my best friend Jim wants to be a director．One day he asked me that I wanted to star in a movie he was making．It based on the story of another friend of ours，Kate．She once gets lost in a forest，but managed to find his way home．It was an interesting story，so the movie never got off the ground because of we didn't even have a camera．In fact，we just wanted to playing games in the forest．However，it is one of the most unforgettable childhood memory I have．

Answer 1

分析 小时候我梦想当一个电影明星，我的好朋友想当导演．他让我在他的电影中当明星，但我们连摄像机都没有，事实上我们只是玩游戏．那是儿时最难忘的记忆．

解答 As a child I dreamed of become a movie star，while my best friend Jim wants to be a director．One day he asked me that I wanted to star in a movie he was making．It∧based on the story of another friend of ours，Kate．She once getslost in a forest，but managed to find his way home．It was an interesting story，so the movie never got off the ground because of we didn't even have a camera．In fact，we just wanted to playing games in the forest．However，it is one of the most unforgettable childhood memory I have．
详解：
1．become改为becoming；动名词错误．句中become作介词of的宾语，要用动名词形式．
2．wants改为wanted；时态错误．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
3．that改为if/whether；连词错误．句意表达的是询问，要用whether或if表示是否的含义．
4．加was；语态错误．句中it与base构成动宾关系，要用被动语态；be based on以…为基础． 
5．gets改为got；时态错误．句意表达的是过去发生的动作，要用一般过去时态．
6．his改为her；代词错误．句意指代的是前面的she，要用对应的形容词性物主代词her来构成．
7．so改为but；连词错误．句意表达的是转折，不是承接．
8．去掉of；连词错误．句中because连接原因状语从句，不能加of．
9．playing改为play；动词搭配错误．want to do sth想要做某事．
10．memory改为memories；名词错误．句中有one of短语表示其中之一，后面的名词要用复数．

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．