题目内容
【题目】写作
你所在的城市最近计划修建地铁,这件事引发了人们的广泛争论。请根据所给信息写一篇英文报道,陈述人们的不同看法,并表明自己的观点。
赞成观点 | 反对观点 | 你的观点 |
1. 交通拥堵问题,方便市民生活。 2. 提供新的交通方式,促进环境保护。 | 1.建设时间长,影响交通。 2.投入资金过大,成本回收过慢。 | …… |
注意:1.开头已给出,但不计入总词数;2.词数120左右。
3.不要逐句翻译,可适当增加内容以使行文连贯;
Recently,people are having an argument on whether a subway should be built or not in the city. Opinions vary from person to person.
【答案】
One possible version:
Recently,people are having an argument on whether a subway should be built or not in the city. Opinions vary from person to person.
Some people think it necessary to build a subway. For one thing,building a subway can help solve traffic problems and people will enjoy a more convenient life. For another,it provides a new means of transportation,which is environmentally friendly.
On the other hand,others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view,the long process of construction is bound to influence the city's traffic. What's more,too much money will be spent building it,and it will take a long time to get the money back.
Weighing the pros and cons,I support the idea that a subway should be built because not only will the environment be protected but also more space will be saved.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,写一篇议论文讨论你所在的城市最近计划修建地铁的事情。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面(1.有人赞成;2.有人反对;3.个人的观点。)的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时,以第三人称为主。4、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,用For one thing,For another;On the other hand,What's more使短文层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如:非谓语动词的使用:动词不定式to build a subway、 it will take a long time to get the money back. 和building a subway、Weighing the pros and cons,以及非限制性定语从句which is environmentally friendly,还有not only…but also,否定词位于句首,句子倒装。