题目内容
【题目】今年你将高三毕业,为使即将升入本校的高一新生的高中生活更顺利,请给他们留言,提出一些中肯的建议。请根据下面的提示,应英语写一篇短文。
1.合理分配学习、锻炼和休息时间
2.搞好老师和同学的关系
3.积极参加校园社团活动
【答案】
I’m honored to give some suggestions to you ,which may help you enjoy your school life better.
As senior high school students ,you will be living a very busy life .So first of all ,you should arrange your time properly .You ‘d better make a timetable so that when to study , exercise and rest. In this way, you can make full use of every minute.
While in school , it is wise to develop a pleasant relationship with teachers and classmates .When you have a problem you can’t work out alone ,you’d better turn to your teachers and classmates for help. Of course ,you should lend a helping hand when necessary. Besides ,I advise you to take an active part in societies at school ,which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves and will also make your school life meaningful and colorful.
I hope everyone can enjoy a wonderful life in senior high school
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇发言稿,所以在语言的使用上要大众化,另外注意题目的要求1.合理安排学习和生活 2. 融洽同学之间的关系 3. 积极参加校园社团活动。所以要按照这样一个顺序去写,注意不要有遗漏。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要充实文章内容,需要注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语live a …life过着怎样的生活;In this way用这种方法;work out解决;advise sb to do 建设某人做某事;take an active part in积极参加;While in school , it is wise to develop a pleasant relationship with teachers and classmates .这个句子中it做形式主语,真正的主语是后面的不定式;Besides ,I advise you to take an active part in societies at school ,which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves and will also make your school life meaningful and colorful.这个句子which引导非限制性定语从句,meaningful and colorful做宾语补足语;