Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据下列内容，以“How Wang Fang and I Became Good Friends”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

1.王芳和我成为好朋友已经三年了，她性格活泼，心地善良，乐于助人，学习也非常好。

2.我永远忘不了第一次见面时的情景。

3.她对我很好，但在学习上对我很严格。

4.尽管我们有时吵架，但不久就和解了。她永远是我的好朋友。

注意：1.不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥。

2. 词数：120左右

Answer 1

【答案】

How Wang Fang and I Became Good Friends

Wang Fang and I have been good friends for three years.She has a lively personality,which makes her popular with everyone.She is kind and always ready to help others.What’s more,she is good at her lessons.

Never shall I forget the day when she came to our class.On that day,when she was led into our classroom.I found she was beautiful girl with a big smile on her face.I liked he at first sight.And fortunately,she became my deskmate.

She’s kind to me,but she is very strict in my study,One day,while we were having a maths test,I couldn’t work out some of the problems.So I asked her to allow me to copy her answers.But she refused firmly.After class,she helped me work out the problems.

Although we quarrel sometimes,we make up soon.I think we will be good friends forever.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据提示信息和图表说明来介绍小区的具体情况。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】 1.在文章中作者准确地道地使用了一些高级词汇和句型，如which引导的非限制性定语从句；be popular with；be ready to；be strict in；make up；never置于句首倒装。

2.文章中时态根据表达需要进行相应的变化，有完成时，有过去时也有一般现在时，时态变化灵活使用准确。3.过渡词汇使用恰到好处，如what’s more；fortunately。