题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假设你是学生李华,得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大,学习效果甚微,请你按照以下要点给他写一封电子邮件,帮助他放松身心,提高学习效率。
1. 快乐学习,保持愉快的心情;
2. 积极参加体育活动,听听歌曲音乐;
3. 多与同学交流,互相鼓励。
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已经为你写好(不记入总词数),但不得抄入答题卡内 。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.
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Best wishes.
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good kind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.
First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. One way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind. In this way we can memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.
Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study. Keep trying, and we will make it.
I hope all these can benefit you.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【解析】
本文是一篇建议类的信件文章,讲述的是李华给自己的朋友关于如何放松自己来促进学习的内容。全文结构鲜明,并且用词新颖。文章分成以下几个部分。第一部分题目中给出,讲述了写这封信的目的。第二部分是讲述作者对朋友的一些提议。第三部分送上了作者自己美好的祝愿。文章用大量的两次以及句型将文章层层链接,不显得松散而枯燥,并且在中间部分紧扣题目所给的要点展开,避免了偏题的现象,同时字数控制也是得当,值得我们同学加以学习并运用。