题目内容
【题目】某英文杂志在其“互动栏目(Q & A)”刊出Lora的来信,欢迎读者就信中提到的问题进行分析并提出建议。假定你是读者李华,请给Lora回信。
Dear editor,
I’m a senior high school student, and I want to read more books of classic literature. But some friends suggest I watch movies based on the books instead. What are the advantages of each approach and what do you suggest?
Thanks!
Lora
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数。
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【答案】Dear Lora,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior Three student. Learning that you are dealing with some troubles, I’m writing to give you some suggestions. Here are some details.
To begin with, I think classics are suitable for reading and are better for your study. What’s more, if you have to choose one, I believe the books of classic literature may be better than movies. Some movie would change the plots in order to adapt to the film time requirements. This will change some of the structure of the original story.
I hope my suggestions are helpful for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,某英文杂志在其“互动栏目(Q & A)”刊出Lora的来信,欢迎读者就信中提到的问题进行分析并提出建议。假定你是读者李华,请给Lora回信。人称使用第一人称,时态使用一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):deal with(处理);to begin with (首先);suitable (适当的);better than (好过);plot(情节)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。