[题目]短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改: 在错词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I will share one experience with you. With the college Entrance Examination draw near, I was filled with great anxiety. However, I couldn’t be absorbed in study, resulting from my failing in the examination. I got very discouraging. Just then ,my teacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and said,“In life we all have moments when we can’t achieve what we want to. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you, and turn them into motivation to inspire yourself.” Her words were reminder that provided me with constant encouragement to smile at life. Consequently , I gained that I deserved.

So it is an optimistic attitude what matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to deal with difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.

【答案】

【1】draw改为drawing

【2】However改为Therefore

【3】from改为in

【4】discouraging改为discouraged

【5】删除want后to

【6】and改为but

【7】yourself改为you

【8】were后加a

【9】that改为what

【10】what改为that

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于记叙文，随着高考临近，我变得很焦虑，导致我多次考试失败。最后是在张老师的帮助下，我认识到我们要把压力转换成动力，战胜生活中的压力。

【1】draw改为drawing 考查非谓语动词。本句是介词with的复合结构，其中with的宾语the college Entrance Examination与动词draw构成主动关系，所以使用现在分词短语在句中做宾语补足语。句意：随着高考临近，我心中充满了焦虑。

【2】However改为Therefore 考查副词。正是因为我很焦虑，所以我才无法集中注意力于学习，导致我在考试中失败。上下文之间是因果关系，所以使用副词therefore表示因果关系。

【3】from改为in 考查动词短语。短语result in导致；result from因为，由于；正是因为我很焦虑，所以我才无法集中注意力于学习，导致我在考试中失败。根据句意可知应该使用短语result in“导致”。

【4】discouraging改为discouraged 考查形容词。形容词discouraged感到泄气的；该词通常修饰人；形容词discouraging令人失望的，该词经常修饰事物。本句中使用discouraged修饰主语I。

【5】删除want后to 考查句子成分。宾语从句what we want中what作为动词want的宾语，原句中的to是多余的。句意：在生活中，我们都会遇见我们无法实现自己想要实现的事情的时候。

【6】and改为but 考查连词。句意：不要让这些消极时刻削弱我们，而是要把它们当成激励自己的动机。上下文之间为转折关系，所以使用but表示转折。

【7】yourself改为you 考查代词。本句中宾格you作为动词inspire的宾语。句意：不要让这些消极时刻削弱我们，而是要把它们当成激励自己的动机。不需要使用反身代词yourself“你自己”做宾语。

【8】were后加a 考查冠词。本句中名词“reminder提醒物，提示物”是一个可数名词，前面加a表示泛指“一件提醒事物”。句意：他的话是一个提醒，给了我不断的鼓励让我微笑面对生活。

【9】that改为what 考查宾语从句。本句中what引导宾语从句，并在句中作为动词deserve的宾语。

【10】what改为that 考查定语从句。本题定语从句的先行词是an optimistic attitude，关系代词that指代先行词在句中做主语，不能省略。

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