Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华，你校交换生Jim在给你的email中提到他对学生会组织的活动感兴趣，并希望你给他提供一项适合他参加的活动。请你给Jim回邮件，内容包括：

1. 活动名称及意图；

2. 活动具体安排；

3. 邀请他参加。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 学生会the Students’ Union

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I am so happy to know that you are interested in the activities that the Students' Union will organize. I’m writing this letter to offer my recommendation.

Next Saturday, there will be a field trip to the Olympic Forest Park. Students will be walking 5km there. We will meet at 8 at the gate of the park and start our walking. All students will wear the T-shirts with our special logo. At the end of the activity we will take a group picture.

I strongly recommend it I believe it is good way to get close to nature, work out, have fun and promote the relationship. It will help you know more about your companions. What's more, it is wonderful to exercise while enjoying the great view.

Please join us! I’ll be more than happy if you take my suggestion into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇是一篇书信类提纲作文，写作时注意以下几点：

1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点：a 活动名称及意图；b 活动具体安排；c 邀请他参加。

2.提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析，构思和想象。要依据提示情景和语句，按照一定的逻辑来写。

3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态，语态，就本文而言，应该用一般现在时。

4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【范文亮点】

提纲性文章难点：提纲性文章难点：扩充成句，因为提纲性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将短句扩充时，要精炼。其中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如强调句，定语从句等.

I am so happy to know that you are interested in the activities that the Students' Union will organize. that引导的宾语从句；that引导的定语从句。

there will be a field trip to the Olympic Forest Park.there be 句型的使用。

it is wonderful to exercise while enjoying the great view. it 作形式主语。

I’ll be more than happy if you take my suggestion into consideration. If 引导的条件句。