Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华。你校将举办一场校园文化艺术表演，想邀请你校外籍教师Ann先生前来观看并作评论。请你按照下面的内容用英语给他写一封电子邮件。

主题：Culture, Art and Our Campus

时间：5月31日上午8:30—11:30

地点：体育馆

内容：每班一个节目，歌曲、舞蹈、课本剧、故事、演讲等形式不限

联系人：李华（电话13613856789）

注意：

词数：100左右（开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总数）。

1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.参考词汇：评论comment; 体育馆gym；课本剧textbook drama

Dear Mrs. Ann,

I’m glad to tell you good news that a school culture and art show will be held in our school.

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Mrs. Ann,

I’m glad to tell you good news that a school culture and art show will be held in our school. Here I’m writing to invite you to watch and give your valuable comments on our shows.

Now let me tell you something about the show. It will take place in our school gym from 8:30 to 11:30 am. on May 31st, the theme of which is“Culture, Art and Our Campus”. Each class is expected to provide one program. They will show their talent in the from of singing English songs, dancing and acting textbook dramas. Of course,telling stories or giving lectures is also included. I’m sure it will be a wonderful show.

I’d appreciate it if you could come. I’m looking forward to your reply. If you have any questions, please contact at 13613856789.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；你校将举办一场校园文化艺术表演，想邀请你校外籍教师Ann先生前来观看并作评论，信中要告诉Ann先生表演的主题、时间、地点、内容和联系方式；时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时，人称使用第一人称。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：school culture and art show（校园文化艺术表演），invite（邀请），comment（评论），school gym（校体育馆），from 8:30 to 11:30 am. on May 31st（5月31日上午8:30—11:30），theme（主题），acting textbook dramas（课本剧）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如同位语从句I’m glad to tell you good news that a school culture and art show will be held in our school.；定语从句It will take place in our school gym from 8:30 to 11:30 am. on May 31st, the theme of which is“Culture, Art and Our Campus”.；虚拟语气I’d appreciate it if you could come.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。