[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的作文. 文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词. 删词:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉. 修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词. 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My English teacher recommended me to take a part in an English speech competition. But I doubt that I have the ability to win. As is known to all my classmates that I can speak English as if he were a native speaker. However, I dare not voice my opinions, especial in public. My best friend Lily has been encouraged me to accept the challenge. On her opinion, whether I can win the competition or not doesn’t matter as long I try my best. Encouraged by her, I have decided to having a try, challenging myself. I must conquer my shy. Wish myself good luck.

【答案】短文改错：

My English teacher recommended me to take /a part in an English speech competition.

去掉a

But I doubt that I have the ability to win. As is known to all my classmates that I can speak

whether \if It

English as if he were a native speaker. However, I dare not voice my opinions, especial in

I especially

public. My best friend Lily has been encouraged me to accept the challenge. On her

encouraging In

opinion, whether I can win the competition or not doesn’t matter as long ∧I try my best.

Encouraged by her, I have decided to having a try, challenging myself. I must conquer my

have

shy. Wish myself good luck

shyness

【解析】take part in是固定用法，意思是参加参与，所以去掉a。

但是我怀疑我是否有能力获胜。这里含有一个宾语从句，引导词在从句中不作任何成分，但是有实际意义，表示是否，所以that改成whether或者if。

这里作形式主语，所以用it。

句意：好像我是一个以英语为母语的人，所以he改成I。

句意：特别是在公共场合。在句首，需要使用副词形式。

“我的朋友”和“鼓励”之间是主动关系，所以用主动语态。

In one’s opinion是固定用法，意思是依某人来看。

句意：我是否能够赢得比赛并不重要，只要了付出了自己最大的努力。As long as是固定用法，意思是只要。

Decide to do是固定用法，意思是决定做某事。

用名词作宾语。所以shy改成shyness。

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2. 词数110左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

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注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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【题目】短文改错

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