Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除；把多余的词 用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problem, I’d like to put forward some advices.

For one thing, more streets and roads should be built. In this way, we can speed up the flow of buses and cars. For other, the number of bikes and cars can be limited, that can decrease the traffic flow. But the most important thing is what the number of private cars should be put under the control. Meanwhile, buses should have its own special routes which cannot be using by other vehicles. Therefore, underground train and city train should be developed quickly.

I do hope my suggestions will be taken.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】complaining后面加about

【2】serious→seriously

【3】advices→advice

【4】other→another

【5】that→which

【6】what→that

【7】under后面的the去掉

【8】its→their

【9】using→used

【10】Therefore→Besides/Moreover

【解析】

【1】complaining后面加about 考查动词短语。complain about抱怨……。

【2】serious→seriously 考查副词。seriously用来修饰动词influenced。

【小题3】advices→advice 考查名词。advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故把advices改为advice。

【4】other→another 考查固定句型。For one thing..., for another...一方面……，另一方面……；是固定句型，故把other改为another。

【5】that→which 考查定语从句。that不能引导非限制性定语从句，根据这里指代前面一句话，故改为which，which可以引导非限制性定语从句。

【6】what→that 考查表语从句。句意：但最重要的是事情是私家车的数量应该得到控制。从句意思完整，在句中不作成分，故要把what改为that。

【7】under后面的the去掉 考查固定短语。under control处在控制之下。

【8】its→their 考查代词。句意：同时，公交车有他们自己的专线，这是其它机动车所不能使用的。与主语buses一致，故把its改为their。

【9】using→used 考查被动语态。根据后面by可知，这里用被动语态，故把using改为used。

【10】Therefore→Besides/Moreover 考查副词。句意：除此以外，地铁和城铁也应该被快速发展。与原文不是因果关系，而是递进关系，故把Therefore改为Besides/Moreover。