Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征稿，题目是The Most Impressive Woman in My Life, 请你写一篇稿件，投给校英文报。内容包括：

1.这位女士的特点；

2.这位女士对于你的影响。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

The Most Impressive Woman in My Life

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Answer 1

【答案】The Most Impressive Woman in My Life

During my life there are many people who impressed me deeply. But my English teacher Miss Zhao is the most impressive woman in my eyes.

Miss Zhao is a warm-hearted lady with a charming smile on her face. As a teacher, she is ready to help those students in need. Besides, she is strict with us and responsible for her work. There was story after story of how Miss Zhao, tired after a day’s work, went late at night to grade our papers. Under her guidance, I became interested in English. Without her help, I couldn’t have made rapid progress.

Such is Miss Zhao, an excellent teacher who makes a deep impression on me and wins my respect.

【解析】这是一篇人物类命题作文。联系题干，以此为中心内容进行选材。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.要分析题干，围绕题干进行选材，在写作思路方面，题目要求写一个在生活中给你留下最深刻印象的女人，所以我们可以将她的外形、性格、人物特点以及她对你产生的影响简要介绍一下。

2.概况要点要齐全，将题目要求的内容罗列完整，重点对她的特点以及她对你产生的影响进行描写，要注意层次结构，注意上下文的衔接。

3.注意时态与语态，全文以一般现在时为主，但叙述到以往发生的事情时注意要用到过去时，描述第三人时要注意动词形态的使用。

【范文亮点】

1.文章采用了“in one’s eyes 在某人眼中”“ become interested in对…感兴趣”“be ready to准备好做某事”“make a deep impression on sb给某人留下深刻印象”等高频短语。

2.文章采用了“During、But、Besides、Under、Without”等介词和连接词使文章更加层次，连贯通顺。

3. an excellent teacher who makes a deep impression on me and wins my respect，在句中，出现了who引导的定语从句。