Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear David,

I am Lihua, a senior high school students. I have recently learnt on the Internet what you are helping students with spoken English by offer an online course. I am writing to ask you for some help.

I have been learnt English for more than four years and I really like English. However, my spoken English is such poor that I can not communicate with foreigners free. My broken English always discourages you from opening my mouth. I am really worrying. I hope you can help me with my spoken English. I believe that I can make a progress with your help.

I would appreciate it if you could agree help me. I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely,

Lihua

Answer 1

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【解析】1.句意：我是李华，一名高中学生。故把students--- student。

2.句意：我最近了解到你在网上帮助学生学英语口语。根据句意可知此处是that引导的宾语从句，从句不缺成分，故把that---what或把that去掉。

3.句意：通过一个网上课程帮助学生学英语口语。by doing sth.通过做某事，故答案为offering。

4.句意：我一直学英语四年多。根据句意可知用现在完成进行时态，故把learnt---learning。

5.因为poor是形容词，故把such---so。

6.句意：因为我的英语口语是如此的差，结果我不能和外国人自由自在地交流。副词修饰动词，故把free---freely。

7.句意：我的英语口语使我丧失信心，不敢开口交流。根据句意可知把you---me。

8.句意：我真的感到担忧。故把worrying---worried。

9.句中progress进步，是不可数名词，故把a去掉。

10.句意：如果你同意帮助我，我将万分感激。agree to do sth.同意做某事，故在help前加to。