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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I used to like junk food very much, and my mother didn't allow me to eat it. Sometimes I would secret go to eat it. I liked to eat French fries（薯条）, and could eat a lot at a time. One day I went to have some again. I ordered two fries and two sandwich. After finish the meal, I got a sick feeling in the stomach. I was very afraid that I didn’t tell my mother. Then I throw up and felt hot all over my body. As a result, my mother came and found that if I got a fever. He took me to the nearby hospital in the hurry. Since then, I never touched junk food again.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.句意：我过去非常喜欢吃垃圾食品，但是我的妈妈不允许我吃。根据句意可知是转折关系，故把and—but。

2.副词修饰动词，故把secret--- secretly。

3.根据two可知名词用复数形式，故把sandwich--- sandwiches。

4.after---在---之后，是介词，after doing sth.故把finish---finishing。

5.此处是so---that---，引导的结果状语从句，故把very---so。

6.根据Then然后，可知句子用一般过去时态，故把throw---threw。

7.句意：结果我妈妈来了，发现我发烧。此处是that引导的宾语从句，故把多余的if去掉。

8.句意：她匆忙带我去医院。根据上文可知把He---She。

9.固定词组：in a hurry匆忙，故把the---a。

10.根据Since then自从那时起，可知句子用现在完成时态，主语是I，故在I后加have。