Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校即将举行国际中学生科学论坛活动，你想报名做一名志愿者。请用英文写一封邮件申请参加。主要内容包括：

1. 写信目的

2. 自我介绍

3. 希望获准

注意：

1. 词数：100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam,

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

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_______________________________________________________________________________

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With all my best regards.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing this letter to apply to work as a volunteer you have advertised for. In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help the visitors from all over the world to know better our school.

I am good at English. In addition, in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience. Furthermore, my interest and skill in communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job.

I would appreciate an interview at your convenience. I'm looking forward to hearing from you in the future.

With all my best regards.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇申请函，内容正式，层次清楚，结构合理。复杂结构的使用较好，not only …but also；定语从句的使用非常准确a volunteer you have advertised for；连接词的使用非常合理：In addition，Furthermore。