Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always share our happiness and sorrow. I’m very grateful to my parents. They give me so many love and spare no efforts to support me. I still remembered once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost kept my company a whole night. Now I’m in Senior 2. Lucky, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate me with encouraging word. Furthermore, they give me enough personal space, that I appreciate so much. What I should do now is to study hardly. When I grow up, I’ll try my best to make my parents to live a happy life.

Answer 1

【答案】share---sharing；many---much；rememberd---remember；a---the；Lucky---Luckily；在communicate后加with；word---words；that---which；hardly---hard；去掉to live中的to

【解析】父母不仅给了我们生命，在成长过程中还给与了无尽的爱和支持。作者讲述了父母对自己的付出，表达了对父母的感激之情。

1.share---sharing.考查动词形式。句中主语是our parents，动词share的主语也是our parents两者一致，此处作状语用动词-ing形式，故share---sharing.

2.many---much.考查形容词。many修饰可数名词复数，此处修饰不可数名词love不用many用much，故many---much.

3. rememberd---remember.考查动词时态。此处指过去发生的事对现在的影响，指现在仍记得用现在时，不用过去时，故rememberd---remember.

4. a---the.考查冠词。the whole night“整个晚上”表示特指，是固定短语，故a---the.

5. Lucky---Lukily.考查副词。此处单独使用作状语用副词形式，故Lucky---Lukily.

6. communicate后加with.考查固定短语。communicate with sb.“和某人交流”用介词with，故communicate后加with.

7. word---words.考查名词。word表示“话语”是可数名词，此处表示泛指用复数，故word---words.

8. that---which.考查定语从句。根据标点是逗号和句意可知此处是非限制性定语从句，不能用that要用which引导，故that---which.

9. hardly---hard.考查相似词。hardly“几乎不”，hard“努力地”，此处修饰study指努力学习，要用hard，故hardly---hard.

10.去掉to live中的to.考查动词用法。make sb. do sth.“使某人做某事”，动词用原形，故去掉to live中的to.