题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Jack给你发来邮件,告诉你他参加美国中西部“汉语桥”比赛(
U. S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest)获得了一等奖,希望你继续帮他学习中文。请你给他回复一封电子邮件。要点如下:
1.祝贺他获奖;
2.希望继续向他学习英语,你帮他学中文;
3.祝愿他能来中国参加决赛。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I’m so pleased to learn that you got the first prize in the U. S. Midwest Chinese Bridge Speech Contest. Congratulations! You are so great to make such rapid progress in learning Chinese! I hope we can continue to learn from and help each other while you help me with my English and I can help you with your Chinese.
I also hope you will be chosen to participate in the final contest to be held in October, which will allow me a chance to show you around my hometown. You are certain to improve and deepen your understanding of Chinese culture. And I’m sure you can enjoy your stay here and learn a lot.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容是回复一封邮件告诉你他参加美国中西部“汉语桥”比赛。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意邮件格式。
【亮点说明】本文层次分明,结构紧凑,语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构。比如定语从句I also hope you will be chosen to participate in the final contest to be held in October, which will allow me a chance to show you around my hometown.宾语从句I’m so pleased to learn that you got the first prize in the U. S.等。