Question

7．阅读下面图表和文字，然后按照要求写一篇150字左右的英语短文．
Brunswick，the international advisory firm，has just released their global survey of over 40，000 people from 26 countries that includes generations，geographies and measures global opinion on a large group of topics such as globalization and automation（自动化）．
      
Here are the 10 countries from the survey that were optimistic about the future．
10．Denmark：20%；
9．Finland：22%；
8．Singapore：24%；
7．Hong Kong，China：32%；
6．Brazil：34%；
5．Thailand：41%；
4．Indonesia：60%；
3．United Arab Emirates：63%；
2．India：73%；
1．Mainland China：74%．
【写作内容】
1．用大约30个单词概况以上内容；
2．用大约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：
1）你觉得中国人为什么对未来非常乐观（至少两个理由）？
2）具体在你个人生活中，该如何保持乐观的心态？
【写作要求】
1．发表观点时必须提供理由或论据；
2．阐述观点或叙述经历时，不能直接引用原文语句；
3．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4．不必写标题．
The message I get from the passage is that about the future people from Mainland China are most optimistic，which，as a good quality，is greatly emphasized in the picture．
I don't think this result is surprising．In my opinion，Chinese people have at least two reasons to be optimistic．Firstly，China has a most dynamic economy and her people's living conditions are constantly being improved，which increases their faith in the future．Secondly，compared to many other countries and regions，China enjoys a peaceful and stable social environment，the positive effects of which can never be overestimated．．
As a Chinese student，I feel proud of my country．At the same time，I have great faith in her future，too．I think I will learn to be an optimistic person because whatever situation we happen to be in，only positive outlooks can bring us hope and courage to meet challenges one after another．（157）．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于图表类作文，首要要看清图表的内容，尤其是数字的介绍从而得出用30个词来概括的结论，在陈述自己观点时，至少需要两点理由来支持，作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
（高分句型一）China has a most dynamic economy and her people's living conditions are constantly being improved，which increases their faith in the future．
该句使用了 are constantly being improved现在进行时的被动语态；which引导非限制性定语从句；
（高分句型二）compared to many other countries and regions，China enjoys a peaceful and stable social environment，the positive effects of which can never be overestimated．．
该句compared to…是固定短语，与…做比较；the positive effects of which 是一个定语从句；
高级词汇：emphasize强调；compared to…与…做比较；have great faith in 对…很有信心；
In my opinion、Firstly、Secondly、At the same time等过段词衔接上下文．

解答 The message I get from the passage is that about the future people from Mainland China are most optimistic，which，as a good quality，is greatly emphasized in the picture．（30个词对文章大意介绍）
    （表达观点）I don't think this result is surprising．In my opinion，Chinese people have at least two reasons to be optimistic．Firstly，（高分句型一）China has a most dynamic economy and her people's living conditions are constantly being improved，which increases their faith in the future．Secondly，（高分句型二）compared to many other countries and regions，China enjoys a peaceful and stable social environment，the positive effects of which can never be overestimated．．
    As a Chinese student，I feel proud of my country．At the same time，I have great faith in her future，too．I think I will learn to be an optimistic person because whatever situation we happen to be in，only positive outlooks can bring us hope and courage to meet challenges one after another．（157）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧