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15．当今，家长开车接送孩子上学的现象很是普遍．假如你是李华．上周五，你们班就该现象进行了激烈的讨论．请根据下列表格中提示的内容用英语写一篇短文，为《中学生英语报》投稿．

赞成方	1．节省时间，孩子可以有足够的睡眠时间； 2．可以舒适地吃早餐； 3．有利于孩子的安全； 4．增加家长与孩子的交流．
反对方	1．造成交通堵塞； 2．增加家长负担； 3．孩子容易养成过分依赖家长，从长远看，不利于孩子的成长．
你的观点	…

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1．字数：110左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Last Friday，our class held a heated discussion about whether parents should drive their children to and from school．（高分句型一）The results are as follows．．
Some believe more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep．Some consider it reasonable just for the sake of children's safety．Still some think it offers more opportunities for parents to communicate with their children．
However，others hold different opinions．Some believe it causes traffic jams．Some think doing so will undoubtedly increase the parents'burdens．Besides，some worry that in the long run children may be more dependent on their parents，which does harm to their growth．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，you can do so if your child is very young，but when he/she grows up to a proper age，you should let him/her to be independent．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 当今，家长开车接送孩子上学的现象很是普遍．假如你是李华．上周五，你们班就该现象进行了激烈的讨论．请根据下列表格中提示的内容用英语写一篇短文，为《中学生英语报》投稿．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：从赞成方、反对方 和 你的观点进行论述  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：for the sake of children's safety为了孩子的安全起见；communicate with 沟通；However然而；Besides另外；In my opinion以我的观点来看；grow up成长；
Last Friday，our class held a heated discussion about whether parents should drive their children to and from school．（高分句型一）
Besides，some worry that in the long run children may be more dependent on their parents，which does harm to their growth．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，you can do so if your child is very young，but when he/she grows up to a proper age，you should let him/her to be independent．（高分句型三）

解答 Last Friday，our class held a heated discussion about whether parents should drive their children to and from school．（高分句型一）The results are as follows．．
       Some believe more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep．Some consider it reasonable just for the sake of children's safety．Still some think it offers more opportunities for parents to communicate with their children．
       However，others hold different opinions．Some believe it causes traffic jams．Some think doing so will undoubtedly increase the parents'burdens．Besides，some worry that in the long run children may be more dependent on their parents，which does harm to their growth．（高分句型二）
       In my opinion，you can do so if your child is very young，but when he/she grows up to a proper age，you should let him/her to be independent．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．