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【题目】请根据下表有关信息,介绍第一个在NBA打球的华裔Chinese--American球员——林书豪

参考词汇: 1州冠军.the state championship 2.哈佛Harvard 3.赛场 court

姓名 林书豪 Jeremy Lin 出生年月 1988年8月23

出生地 美国加州(California) 身高 19 1厘米

体重 91公斤

主要事迹 上高中时,带领校队获得州冠军;

哈佛大学毕业后,2010年开始在NBA打球。

影响 2012年2月,他在NBA赛场上的神奇表现引起全世界的关注,现被认为是世界上最受欢迎的球星之一。

【写作要求】 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容

【评分标准】 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯

【答案】

One possible version:

Born in California ,the US on August 23rd,1988,Jeremy Lin is the first Chinese-American to play in the NBA. He is 191cm in height and weighs 91kgs. When he was in high school, Jeremy Lin led his school team to win the state championship. After graduating from Harvard University, he began to play in the NBA in 2010. In February2012,Jeremy Lin attracted the world's attention because of his wonderful performance on the basketball court and he is regarded as one of the most popular players in the world.

【解析】

试题分析:本篇基础写作是介绍第一个在NBA打球的华裔球员林书豪。因为介绍的是学生们较熟悉的人物,而且提供的信息较全,所以学生们不至于无话可说。但是要求只用五句话表述出来,这就要求学生有较高的语言组织能力,应该适当使用复合句或者短语等帮助把内容表达清楚全面。此外还要注意介绍人物时的先后顺序和时态的正确使用。

【亮点说明】此篇书面表达用多样化的句式结构涵盖了所有提供的信息,比如非谓语Born in California,US on August 23rd,1988,时间状语从句When he was in high school,介词短语After graduating from Harvard University和最后很长的一个并列句。这些都显示了作者非常高的遣词造句、组织语言的能力。

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【题目】【改编】One period of our lives when better results are demanded of us is, strangely enough, childhood. Despite being young we are expected to achieve good grades, stay out of trouble, make friends at school, do well on tests, perform chores at home and so on. Its not easy.

The good news is that being likeable can help a child perform better. Likeable children enjoy many advantages, including the ability to cope more easily with stresses of growing up.

In her book Understanding Child Stress, Dr. Carolyn Leonard states that children who are likeable and optimistic are able to gain support from others. This leads to focus and resilience, the ability to recover from or adjust early to life stress; a child who has adequate emotional armor can continue down the path to success. Much research shows that resilience has enabled children to succeed in school, avoid drug abuse, and develop a healthy self-awareness.

Why does a likeable child more easily handle stress and do better in his or her life? Because likeability helps create whats known as a positive feedback loop(回圈). The positive feelings you want to see in other people are returned to you, creating constant encouragement and motivation to deal with the daily stress of life.

This feedback loop continues into adulthood. To return once again to the example of teaching, learning becomes easier with a likeable personality. Michael Delucchi of the University of Hawaii reviewed dozens of studies to determine if likeable teachers received good ratings because of their likeability or because they in fact taught well. Delucchi found that Students who perceive(察 a teacher as likeable, in contrast to those who do not, may be more attentive to the information that the teacher delivers and theyll work harder on assignments, and they will learn more.

You may have noticed this pattern in your own life when you try to give some advice. The more positive your relationship with that person, the more he or she seems to listen, and the more you feel certain that that person has heard you and intends to act on your words.

【1】What can we know from the first paragraph?

A. Life is not easy for everyone.

B. Children often expected more.

C. Being a happy child is not easy.

D. People often demand more of children.

【2】What is the meaning of the underlined word armor?

A. The ability to control oneself.

B. The ability to deal with pressure.

C. The ability to change the situation.

D. The ability to tell right from wrong.

【3】From the third paragraph we can know likeable children _______.

A. are more optimistic and confident

B. are easy to turn to others for help

C. can easily get support from other people

D. often choose not to rely on others

【4】What did Michael Delucchi find in the studies?

A. Likeable teachers may have a good effect on students.

B. Likeable teachers teach much better.

C. Teachers like likeable students better.

D. Likeable teachers have more flexible teaching methods.

【5】What is the main idea of the passage?

A. Children are more likeable than adults.

B. People with likeability often perform better in life.

C. Likeable people have a happy childhood.[.

D. People should be more likeable.

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