题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Tony报名参加了京剧社,请你用电子邮件通知他本周末的社团活动。内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.活动地点和时间;
3.活动内容。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tony,
I’m glad you signed up for the Peking Opera club of our school. I’m sure you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture by learning Peking Opera.
This weekend we will have the first club activity of the term. The activity will be held in the school auditorium at 7 o’clock on Saturday evening. We will invite one famous Peking Opera actress from our city’s Peking Opera Troupe to give us a speech about Peking Opera masks and costumes. In addition to teaching techniques, she will also give us demonstrations and perform several parts for us. I’m sure her speech will be wonderful.
I hope you’ll be present on time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件, 告诉自己参加京剧社的朋友Tony,关于周末的社团活动。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
要求:1.表达欢迎
2. 活动地点和时间
3. 活动内容
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be delighted to, sigh up for, give a speech, in addition to, give performances, look forward to
第三步:连词成句
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
I’m glad you signed up for the Peking Opera club of our school.
The activity will be held in the school auditorium at 7 o’clock on Saturday evening.
We will invite one famous Peking Opera actress from our city’s Peking Opera Troupe to give us a speech about Peking Opera masks and costumes.
In addition to teaching techniques, she will also give us demonstrations and perform several parts for us.
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
