Question

12．假设你是李华，有高中毕业后申请国外大学（如Harvard University等）的想法，但不够确定，于是给你校外籍职业规划顾问David写邮件咨询．要点如下：
1．申请原因；
2．自身优势；
3．未来职业选择的初步想法等．
注意：1．词数：120-150；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们给外籍职业规划顾问David写邮件咨询高中毕业后申请国外大学，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：申请原因；自身优势；未来职业选择的初步想法等．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为申请国外大学的原因．第二部分为自身优势．第三部分为未来职业选择的初步想法
重点短语与句型：
apply for  申请…
be famous for 因…而出名
keep a balance保持平衡
 have a talent for 有天赋
高分句型一：As a Chinese high school student to graduate this year，I sincerely apply for a chance to study abroad..此句用了不定式to graduate作后置定语，表将来
高分句型二：I keep a balance among all the subjects，which makes me excellent in our school．此句用which引导非限制性定语从句

解答 Mr David，
As a Chinese high school student to graduate this year，I sincerely apply for a chance to study abroad（高分句型一）．It has been my dream all the time to study in your university，which is famous for its academic atmosphere．（申请国外大学的原因）
As a student with many hobbies such as reading books，playing basketball and chess．I keep a balance among all the subjects，which makes me excellent in our school（高分句型二）．I go in for various out-of-class activities．I like playing football，table tennis，and so on I'm also a member of many clubs for music and opera．In addition，I'm easy to get along with and ready to help others in trouble．I'm a volunteer in my neighborhood．Besides，I have a talent for English，and I won first prize in the English Speech Contest in my province last year．I can communicate fluently with native speakers in English．I believe I can adjust myself to the new environment soon．（自身优势）
I'd appreciate it if I could be admittedI want to be a translator．I'm looking forward to your reply And please contact me by e-mail：lihuaqq．（未来职业选择的初步想法）
Yours sincerely
Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．