Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Thomas,

I feel sorry to know your worries about getting fatter and fatter so that you have failed

the sports test. Nothing can be more disappointment than that.

As far as I am concerned, there are many reasons cause your failure in a test. Firstly, you are very lazy to have regular sports. In fact, sports can help you keep fit and energy. Secondly, you eat too much meat, that makes you gain weight easily. Finally, you sleep more than you need. There was no denying that it is all these things that have caused your problem and your worries.

As I stated above, you should first eat less meat but more fruits and vegetable. And then you should have regular sports so that you can burn the fat that builds up in your body and to become slim.

Hope my advice is some help to you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】disappointment→disappointing

【2】加that/which;cause→causing

【3】a→the

【4】very→too

【5】energy→energetic

【6】that→which

【7】was→is

【8】vegetable→vegetables

【9】去掉and/to

【10】加of

【解析】

试题分析：本文讲的是一个学生体育测试不及格的一些原因。

【1】disappointment→disappointing考查形容词。是形容一件事，用形容词，没什么事比那件事更令人沮丧了，所以用disappointing。

【2】加that/which;cause→causing考查关系词。可看成是一句从句，也可把cause看成非谓语动词，所以加that/which;cause→causing。

【3】a→the考查冠词。上文已经提到是体育测试了，此处特指，故用the。

【4】very→too考查副词。Too...to..结构，表示太....以至于不能....，故用too

【5】energy→energetic考查形容词。Keep energetic保持活力，用energetic。

【6】that→which考查关系词。非限制性定语从句，故用which。

【7】was→is考查动词时态。本文使用一般现在时，用is。

【8】vegetable→vegetables考查名词。可数名词用复数，所以用vegetables。

【9】去掉and/to考查连词和介词。可以表示一个结果，也可以表示并列，但是这两者不能并存，去掉and/to。

【10】加of考查介词。Be of +名词与这个名词的形容词效果一样，加of。