题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,计划和同学去中山公园陪老师过教师节。请你给张路写一封电子邮件,邀请她一同前往,内容包括:1.出发时间:上午八点半在校门口集合乘2路公交车去中山公园;2.活动: 欣赏花展,看戏剧表演,和老师们表演节目;3.中午和老师们一起吃饭;4.返回时间:下午五点左右;5.带相机给老师拍照。注意:1 词数100左右;2. 可适当加入细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总字数。
【答案】Dear Zhanglu,
I'd like to invite you to join us for a visit the Zhongshan Park on September 10 for the Teachers' Day.
We will gather at the school gate and take No. 2 Bus to leave for the Zhongshan Park at 8:30 in the morning. There we can enjoy a wonderful flower exhibition where many kinds of flowers will be shown. We'll see plays performed by the famous actors. The most wonderful thing will be our performing with our teachers, which will give us a good memory. At noon, we'll have lunch together with our teachers. We'll return at about 5:00 in the afternoon. If you are able to come, please let me know and take a camera with you, we'll take many photos for the teachers.
I'm waiting for your early reply.
Yours truly,
Lihua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲作文,内容给张路写一封电子邮件,邀请她一同前往。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意写邮件的格式。
