Question

【题目】假如你是高二学生李华，这次考试后，学校放假三天，你打算和同学出去旅游以调节身心，可是父母亲不同意，担心你的安全及学习。为此你与父母吵架，心情不好，不知如何说服父母。请用英语给你的外教Jimmy写信，向他咨询如何让你父母同意你的计划。
注意：
1）可以适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
2）词数100左右。 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总字数。
参考词汇：the Dragon Boat Festival 端午节
Dear Jimmy,
How is everything with you?
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jimmy,
How is everything with you?
I am writing the letter to ask for your advice.
I am taking an important test now. After that, there happens to be a three days off for the Dragon Boat Festival, you know, a traditional one in China . I have been planning to go traveling with my classmates to adjust myself mentally and physically after the tiring test. However, my parents oppose my plan strongly, saying not only is it unsafe but it may affect my learning as well. Therefore, I quarreled with them once and again, feeling upset. Honestly speaking, I am dying for this traveling but what shall I do? You are good at communicating with others. Would you give me some tips on how to get my parents' support?
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是向外教Jimmy咨询如何让你父母同意你的计划。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。