题目内容
12．假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
I am happy to stand here make a speech．The topic of my speech is"My school"．My school is very big．There is 2，000 students．We have a big playground with lots of trees around it．We had fun at school．After the class we play games and do sports，like play basketball and football．Sometimes we have class meetings．They are very interested．My school is like a big family．The teachers are kind and the students are friendly for each other．In my eye，my school is one of the better schools．I am pride of it．
分析 本文主要介绍作者的学校．它很大，有2000学生，有个大操场．课后他们做游戏和锻炼，老师和学生都很友好．
解答 I am happy to stand here∧make a speech．The topic of my speech is"My school"．My school is very big．There is 2，000 students．We have a big playground with lots of trees around it．We had fun at school．After the class we play games and do sports，like play basketball and football．Sometimes we have class meetings．They are very interested．My school is like a big family．The teachers are kind and the students are friendly for each other．In my eye，my school is one of the better schools．I am pride of it．
详解：
1．加to 考查动词不定式．此处动词不定式表示目的．
2．is改为are 考查主谓一致．there be结构中be与其后接的主语在数上一致．students是复数，要用be的复数are．
3．had改为have 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是现在的事情，要用一般现在时态．
4．去掉the 考查冠词．after class意为"下课后"，是固定搭配．
5．play改为playing 考查动名词．like是介词，后接动词时要用动名词形式．
6．interested改为interesting 考查现在分词．现在分词作表语主要表示主语的性质和特征．
7．for改为to 考查介词．be friendly to意为"对…友好"，是固定搭配．
8．eye改为eyes 考查固定搭配．in one's eyes意为"在某人看来"，是固定搭配．
9．better改为best 考查形容词最高级．根据句意：我校是最好的学校之一．用形容词最高级．
10．pride改为proud 考查形容词．be proud of意为"以…自豪"，是固定搭配．pride意为"傲，自豪"，是名词．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
| A． | passing． | B． | going by． | C． | passed． | D． | goes by． |
A quick weight loss program sounds like a good idea at the time，but you'll soon discover that fad diets can be more dangerous to your health than beneficial to it．Here are four reasons why fad diets are bad for you，plus tips on how to create a diet plan that helps you lose the extra pounds safely-and keep them off．
1．You'll Wind Up Feeling Dehydrated （脱水的）
Most of the weight you drop when you lose weight too quickly tends to be water weight，which can lead to rapid dehydration．Your body burns calories and excess （过量的） weight in stages，and if you force your body to lose weight faster than it naturally wants to，you can cause serious health problems for yourself．
Tip：When trying to lose weight，remind yourself that water is your friend．To keep from overeating and to stay properly hydrated （含水的），drink one to two glasses before a meal．Also，if you exercise daily，be sure to increase your water intake in order to counteract （抵消，中和） the water lost from sweating （出汗） while working out．
2．You'll Get Tired Quickly
Fad diets involve depriving （剥夺） yourself of calories，however，calories are what translate into the energy your body needs to get through the day．If you eat fast or eat less than what your body requires in order to lose weight too quickly，you'll find yourself feeling tired for most of the day．
Tip：Eat smaller meals throughout the day．This will help to boost （促进） your metabolism （新陈代谢），and can provide you with more energy to help you lose weight in a healthy manner．
3．You Can Get Serious Digestive （消化的） Problems
In actual fact，losing weight too quickly can lead to severe diarrhea （腹泻），to be followed later by constipation （便秘）．As with losing water weight，having diarrhea over an extended period of time can lead to dehydration （脱水）-a condition that can be life-threatening．
Tip：Ensure that you have a diet which is rich in fibre （纤维）．
4．You'll Suffer from Malnutrition （营养不良）
Crash diets and fasting are dangerous because they restrict （限制） you from consuming （消耗） fats and carbs （碳水化合物），but they're also unsafe since they prevent your body from getting the vitamins and minerals it needs．If you restrict your body from its normal caloric intake over a long period of time，your body will be deprived （使丧失） of important nutrients （营养） and you'll become malnourished．
Tip：A healthy，well-balanced diet is the key to proper weight loss．Talk to your doctor about dietary supplements （补充物） if you are concerned about the amount of nutrients you're getting．
Title：4Reasons Why Fad Diets are Bad for You
| Introduction：（71）While/Though/Although a quick weight loss program sounds like a good program，fad diets will cause damage to your health． | |
| Reasons | Tips |
| 1．You'll Wind Up Feeling Dehydrated •The majority of the （72）weight you drop quickly tends to be water weight，leading to rapid dehydration． •If your body is （73）forced to lose weight unnaturally，you will have serious health problems． | •To avoid overeating and to stay properly hydrated，drink one to two glasses of water before a meal． •If you take （74）exercise daily，be sure to increase your water intake．It can counteract the water you （75）lose from sweating while working out． |
| 2．You'll Get Tired Quickly •If you eat fast or less than required，you'll feel （76）tired/exhausted for most of the day for lack of calories． | •Eat smaller meals throughout the day，so you are （77）provided/supplied with more energy to lose weight in a healthy manner． |
| 3．You Can Get Serious Digestive Problems •Actually，if you lose weight too quickly，you will （78）suffer from diarrhea or dehydration． | •Make sure that you have a diet （79）containing a large amount of fibre． |
| 4．You'll Suffer from Malnutrition •If fad diets restrict your body from its normal caloric intake for a long time，you will become malnourished． | •A healthy，well-balanced diet is the key to（80）reducing/losing weight properly． •Consult your doctor or pharmacist about dietary supplements if necessary． |