题目内容
17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）画掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意1．每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Dear Jenny，
I am really sorry to hear that you feel badly after entering a new school．
You should remember that it is very common but other students may face the same problem，so you don't have to worry too many about it．
There is also something which you can do to change this situation．First，try to invite some of your classmate to take part in some activities together after chool．This will help you understood each other better by communicating about others．What's more，help others when they are in the trouble，and ask them help you when you have difficulty．If you did so，I believe you will make many new friends there soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．
分析 Li Hua得知Jenny进入新学校后感觉有很多不适应后，写信向Jenny提供一些尽快适应新环境的建议．
解答 Dear Jenny，
I am really sorry to hear that you feel badly after entering a new school．You should remember that it is very common but other students may face the same problem，so you don't have to worry too many about it．There is also something which you can do to change this situation．First，try to invite some of your classmate to take part in some activities together after school．This will help you understood each other better by communicating about others．What's more，help others when they are in the trouble，and ask them∧help you when you have difficulty．If you did so，I believe you will make many new friends there soon．
Yours，
Li Hua
详解：
1．badly改为bad；考查形容词，feel此处用作系动词，后面跟形容词bad作表语．
2．but改为and；考查连词，结合句意分析上下文之间为并列关系，故用and连接．
3．many改为much；考查近义词辨析，many修饰可数名词的复数形式，much修饰不可数名词，结合句意此处要用much．
4．which改为that；考查关系代词，定语从句中先行词为不定代词时关系代词要用that．
5．classmate改为classmates；考查名词单复数，根据句意"我的一些同学"可知"同学"要用复数形式．
6．understood改为understand；考查动词，help sb do是固定结构，意为"帮助某人做某事"．
7．about改为with；考查介词，communicate with sb 是固定搭配，意为"与某人交流"．
8．去掉the；考查冠词，in trouble是固定短语，意为"在困境中"，中间不加冠词．
9．help前面加to；考查不定式，ask sb to do sth 是固定搭配，意为"要求某人干某事"．
10．did改为do；考查条件状语从句，若主句的谓语动词表示将来，与其连用条件状语从句的谓语动词常用一般现在时表示将来时间．
点评 短文改错首先要通读全文，了解短文的中心思想，再分析句式结构，弄清句子间的结构关系，然后运用所掌握的语法，词汇等基本知识找出错误加以改正．
