Question

【题目】现在社会中，人们身体每况愈下，请写一篇以“如何保持健康为题”的文章。

注意：1.、词数：80-100左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Do you want a strong body? Let me tell you how to do.

First, it is important to have a balanced diet and eat lots of fruit and vegetables, you shouldn't eat too many candies. Drinking lots of boiled water is good for bodies. Second, You should do exercise such as basketball, volleyball, Football. Third, you had better keep a healthy lifestyle. You should sleep at least eight in the evening, too. But you shouldn't drink coffee or tea before sleep. You shouldn’t work or study too hart. Many students do not have breakfast before they go to school. It’s a quite bad habit and it's bad for your health you couldn't learn well in your classes if you don't eat any thing .In a word, it is easy to keep fit. These ways can keep your healthy.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于议论文写作，根据提示信息和题目要求来展开。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。写作书信时一定要注意文章结构和层次，提出建议时要具有说服力，对于一些常用的动词，要注意其其他形式以更为简练的表达自己的观点，要灵活运用各种短语和从句来丰富文章的内容。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如First, it is important to have a balanced diet and eat lots of fruit and vegetables, you shouldn't eat too many candies是it引导的主语性从句。Drinking lots of boiled water is good for bodies用动名词短语作主语。It’s a quite bad habit and it's bad for your health you couldn't learn well in your classes if you don't eat any thing .In a word, it is easy to keep fit也是it引导的主语性从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语 have a balanced diet , is good for,keep a healthy lifestyle, keep fit等。运用多个情态动词shouldn't、couldn't等来增强文章中所提建议的说服力，还有插入语First，Second,，But 和in a word的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。